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02/13/2012

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Please write a creative and imaginative mini saga with 100 words beginning with "Once upon a time......."


This is from Blean Azeez

 


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Hadiya Riasib
02/13/2012 2:12pm

Rosie in Danger

Once upon a time, there was a girl called Rosie and her mother. They lived in a small flat. One day, Rosie and her mum had gone out to the malls. However, when Rosie had gone there her  mum had disappeared..... In her place was a revolting, sloppy monster. This malicious, malevolent monster had ate Rosie's mum and had left Rosie....  All of a sudden, Rosie heard a BANG!!!! There it was a alien ship! She was petrified!!! Suddenly, Rosie felt something and she saw she was locked up!!! What had happened??? 

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Hussain Ali pod 2
02/14/2012 12:12pm

Once upon a time there lived a small boy named Charlie.he was born during the time pirates were around.One night Charlie was taken away by pirates and was put in their ship.The following morning Charlie opened his eyes and could see and hear crews of evil people laughing menacingly and he got really horrified.Suddenly ,out of nowhere, he was picked up and tied by a rope.the putrid pirates got a wooden board and attached it to the ship.Then the pirates started shouting at Charlie and saying walk the plank kid and do it right now!he didn't know what a plank was so he carried on walking.sharp points from swords were pushing against his back.The next minute he found himself in a freezing ocean.He could hear monsters howling and screeching and looking at him with vicious eyes.Suddenly he was grabbed and pulled nowhere to be seen ,without having time to think...

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Anwar Osman link
02/14/2012 12:54pm

One sunny day, under the scorching sun was a boy called Jimmy, he was a diligent boy moreover consistent in his work. He was sitting on a bench admiring a book he likes, UNTILL... A colossal hand appeared behind him, a shiver went down Jimmys spine. SILENCE... no voice was heard but the hart beat of Jimmy, he knew he had to face his fear and to stand up on it. He said in his head “on the count of three 1....2....3....” the monster disappeared. There was a big smile on his face the relief was unbelievable.

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Anwar link
02/14/2012 12:59pm

“this is my ending to my story”

He went home and thought about today

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Anwar link
02/15/2012 12:50am

“ the last message was wrong this is the ending”

However something occurred ...

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Tehzeeb
02/14/2012 1:35pm

Story

Once upon a time there was a girl which was very rich and radiant. Her name was Daisy. One day her kind mum kindly thought that she would decorate her room as lovely as the queen's. Because of that, her mum wanted to give her a surprise so she told Rosie to go shopping with her friends. Her mum dropped her off to her friends and her and her friends but she didn't go shopping she went somewhere else. At home her mum had decorated her room and was waiting for her. It was 2:00am and she hadn't come so her mum went to find her she went every where. Then she thought there could only be one place she could be 'the grown up party' where she really wanted to go but her mum didn't let her. Her mum went was she there..............................

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Aiman Mahmood pod 3
02/15/2012 2:33am

Once a upon a time there lived a teacher called 
Mr troop he worked really hard until he was in a messy loop day an night 
With all his might 
But one day there was a hideous spider 
He found in the room 
He was extremely scared 
But then came superwomen To save the day 
Oh joy yippee yay 
mr troop fainted as she picked up the spider 
Aww it's so cute she would say 
To the little thin legged spider who had been munching on his paperwork then she flew away 
Mr troop woke in spidermans arms !!

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Maia
02/15/2012 12:50pm

Tracie and Jane 

Once upon a time two friends, Tracy and Jane, were sat at home one day and there was nothing to do. Should they go to the cinema? Should they catch a train to a show in London ?  Or should they buy those amazing flights on offer to Las Vegas? Well, really, what is a girl to do? FASTER than LIGHTENING the bags were packed, security check was passed with flying colors and the cabin door to adventure yawned before them. One glamorous weekend later it was sadly time to return . No! Where are the passports? No work for them tomorrow!

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Hamzah Umar
02/15/2012 1:41pm

Terror Tsunami

Once upon a time, Bob and his father had started a mission...a mission to sail the whole world and make history, as Bob overlooked the Atlantic ocean he got that curious feeling inside him...

The wind whistled whilst nearby trees swayed in perfect unison, spontaniously the man~made boat gave a huge leap under as a thunderous tsunami glared at the boat with evil eyes, Bob's head span due to the death of his horror struck father infront of his eyes! Swirling in the ocean, blood clotted Bob's brain as he began to hit broken woodboards. Suddenly it all ended...

Hamzah Umar Pod 3

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mohammed ali khan link
02/18/2012 4:57am

prince and princess
once upon a time there lived a faire princess and her charming prince.the charming prince longed to win the affections of the princess,but she hid in her heart growing affections for him.

one day the prince and princess were riding upon the princes white stead,suddenly a little evil goblin came to the prince and said to him ahead is danger take your right or else.The princess was really afraid and told the charming prince to take the right,then a gang of evil people came and hit the prince after that the prince was unconscious.But while the prince was on the floor the evil gang took the princess away.

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Hadiya Riasib
02/25/2012 7:11am

New Blog!!! :) :)

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Dermatend Reviews link
02/24/2013 10:36pm

I liked Maia's saga.Did you get any other interesting Story.Do share with us.

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abwe link
02/26/2013 10:54pm

Will surely write mini saga with 100 words with the beginning as "Once upon a time......."., and will post it as soon as possible.

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